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| 제목 | Theater | 등록일 | 2014-04-09 |
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| 내용 | I usually go to a theater called Yong-In CGV It is located in Yong-In. It takes about 10 minutes from my houes. I usually go there by a car The theater is on the 7th floor in a building The tiket office on the 4 floor. 3~4(Three or four ???) people work there. They wear uiforms, they are very kind and friendly. I can see a snack bar. There I can buy water,poncorn and drinks I can see posters on the wall, brochures,a game center. There many table and chairs. there, peolpe wait for movie. It is very close to my house and it is the biggest in my town There are many facilities such as restaurants, cafes and bars. There is convenient public transportation and a big parking lot. It is always clean, big and maintained I have a membership card, I get a discount and gain point |
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| 담당강사 | Angela | 등록일 | 2014-04-10 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I usually go to a theater called Yong-In CGV . -I usually go to a theater called Yong-In CGV . It is located in Yong-In. -It is located in Yong-In. It takes about 10 minutes from my houes. -From my place,it would take about 10 minutes away to go there. I usually go there by a car. -Good sentence The theater is on the 7th floor in a building. -The theater is on the 7th floor The tiket office on the 4 floor. 3~4(Three or four ???) people work there. -The ticket office is on the 4rth . They wear uiforms, they are very kind and friendly. -The USHER 's wear uniforms.They are very kind and friendly. *USHER's are the person who leads people to their seats in a theater, at a wedding, etc. I can see a snack bar.There I can buy water,poncorn and drinks.I can see posters on the wall, brochures,a game center. -I can also see a snack bar .There I can buy water,poncorn and drinks. I can see posters on the wall, brochures,and game center. = Good sentence! There many table and chairs. there, peolpe wait for movie. - It is very close to my house and it is the biggest in my town .
There are many facilities such as restaurants, cafes and bars. -There are many facilities such as restaurants, cafes and bars. There is convenient public transportation and a big parking lot. -There is a convenient public transportation and a big parking lot. It is always clean, big and maintained I have a membership card, I get a discount and gain point. -It is always clean and big. I always maintain
Comment Hello Neo!This topic is really wonderful.Thanks for being a very hardworking student. Thanks for sharing about this information, ENJOY YOUR EVERY DAY LIFE :) BE A BLESSING TO OTHER'S AND ALWAYS INSPIRE PEOPLE :) HAVE A GREAT DAY AHEAD :) -teacher Angela
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