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제목 | Go jogging | 등록일 | 2014-04-15 |
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내용 | I can't jog often. but I go jogging Whenever I have time. I think I usually jog on holidays. I like to jog. and do other things like ~walking and listening to music. But in my real life,actully, I cannot do this often. I think I can only go jogging once or twice a month. it's not only my problem, I think most of korean men are the same. when I need to talk about my hobbies, like now on OPIc test, it is really hard to think one because I usually don't have time. My daily routine is home and office. That's it. I often go to work on Saturday, so even on the weekends I'm busy. So, I think many koreans don't have hobbies they do often. |
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담당강사 | Angela | 등록일 | 2014-04-15 |
첨삭 내용 | CORRECTION I can't jog often but I go jogging Whenever I have time. I think I usually jog on holidays. I like to jog. and do other things like ~walking and listening to music. But in my real life, actully,I cannot do this often. I think I can only go jogging once or twice a month. it's not only my problem, I think most of korean men are the same. when I need to talk about my hobbies, like now on OPIc test, it is really hard to think one because I usually don't have time.
That's it. I often go to work on Saturday, so even on the weekends I'm busy. (Or you can also say "I often go to work on Saturday, so even over the weekends I'm busy. So, I think many koreans don't have hobbies they do often.
COMMENT Hello Neo!This is a good topic!You wrote it vey well.Jogging is a form of activity. It builds strong bones and helps to maintain a healthy body. It's good that you are trying to exercise even though you don't have much time.Keep it up! Thank you for the wonderful information. Enjoy your day! |