Definitely, IT is the great legacy to  of the human being. By the development of IT techniques such as computers, networks, broadcasting or telecommunication, our lives have been made more convenient. Complicated and repeated work is handled with IT-wares, and we can focus on creating or valuable works. Efficiency or effectiveness has been increased innovatively. Of course, there are a lot of adverse effects (pl) of IT-wares. Focusing on the speed and efficiency makes us lose humanity or and emotion. Sometimes, private info. or wrong info. is exposed to the public, and it makes some people to the victims. So, we should consider how to use IT techniques wisely for mankind.

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 We can focus on creating or valuable works
--I'm not exactly sure what you meant?
--> We can focus on creating valuable work
--> We can focus on creating and valuing work

Another great job. Just so you now when we have short sentences with "and", it's not always necessary to use a comma.

For example: I conducted the review and I emailed the results to the HR department.
The comma is optional. So yours isn't wrong. I just wanted to say it's not necessary if you don't like it