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제목 Thanks for calling me Jack 등록일 2014-01-07
내용 I am very happy to join your class by the phone. It was good experience for me yesterday.
In my company, I have to use english for the general business which have T-conference with our global teammates and training our system to customers in oversea. So I want to improve my communication skill in english.I believe you can help me a lot.

In addition, my baby lives her grandma on weekdays. During every weekend, I can take care of her.
So I really miss her during the weeks.

Thank you.
담당강사 Jeck 등록일 2014-01-07
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I am very happy to join your class by the phone. It was good experience for me yesterday. In my company, I have to use english for the general business which have T-conference with our global teammates and training our system to customers in oversea. So I want to improve my communication skill in english.I believe you can help me a lot. In addition, my baby lives her grandma on weekdays. During every weekend, I can take care of her. So I really miss her during the weeks. Thank you.

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I am very happy to join your phone class. It was a good experience for me yesterday.
In my company, I have to use English for general business in which we use T-conference with our global teammates and teaching our system to the customers in overseas. So I want to improve my communication skills in English. I believe you can help me a lot.

In addition, my baby lives with her grandma on weekdays. During weekends, I can take care of her.
So I really miss her during weekdays.

Thank you.

( based on the conversation we had yesterday)

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