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| 제목 | Hello teacher.. | 등록일 | 2014-01-07 |
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| 내용 | Hello teacher. I'm your sutdent called "jelly". I'm sorry that I did not prepare to study this calss. As you know that I have traveled for somedays. I retuned to home by airplane at yesterday 10 AM. I want to talk about my travel which I have visited Jeju island where is located in southern of Korea peninsula. The Climate of Jeju island is very different from korea winter. If you arrive the airport you can feel warm wind in front of your face. Although this place where I live is very cold and chill wind. Because the island is located in the ocean of south and it is located in south. When you drive around the road on beach, you can find a lot of flower and strange tree which i have't seen before anywhere. But the sight of landscape is very wonderfull and beautifull. If you have a good luckey, you will meet some bird on the sky which sing loudly. I have stayed for 5 days include last weekend. Everything was good except someting. Unfortunately I taked a serious stomachache. I geuss that I take some strange traditional food which cant get only get this place |
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| 담당강사 | Ida | 등록일 | 2014-01-08 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hello teacher. I'm your sutdent called "jelly". I'm sorry that I did not prepare to study this calss. As you know that I have traveled for somedays. I retuned to home by airplane at yesterday 10 AM. I want to talk about my travel which I have visited Jeju island where is located in southern of Korea peninsula. The Climate of Jeju island is very different from korea winter. If you arrive the airport you can feel warm wind in front of your face. Although this place where I live is very cold and chill wind. Because the island is located in the ocean of south and it is located in south. When you drive around the road on beach, you can find a lot of flower and strange tree which i have't seen before anywhere. But the sight of landscape is very wonderfull and beautifull. If you have a good luckey, you will meet some bird on the sky which sing loudly. I have stayed for 5 days include last weekend. Everything was good except someting. Unfortunately I taked a serious stomachache. I geuss that I take some strange traditional food which cant get only get this place **************************************************************************************************** Hi, I'm your student named Jelly. I'm sorry that I didn't prepare for this class. As you know, I travelled for few days. I returned home by plane yesterday at 10AM. I want to talk about my trip to Jeju Island, located in the Southern of Korea peninsula. The climate of Jeju Island is different from the winter in Korea. If you arrive at the airport you can feel the warm wind on your face. In where I live, the wind is cold and chilly, because the island is located in the ocean of the south and it is in south. When you drive around the road, you can find a lot of flowers and strange trees that I haven’t seen before. The scenery is wonderful and very beautiful. If you are lucky, you will see some birds chirping loudly. I stayed there for 5 days including the weekend. Everything was good, except for one thing. Unfortunately, I had a serious stomachache. I guess, I have taken some strange traditional food which can only get there. Hi Jelly, I just read and checked what you have written about your trip. I am happy that you enjoyed your trip except for one thing. I love to hear more of your story when we have our next class. Please check the corrections when you have the time. Have a great day! -Teacher Ida^^ | ||