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| 제목 | 2Days : Introduction My cowokers. | 등록일 | 2014-05-07 |
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| 내용 | I would like to talk about people I work with in the cost estimation part. One of my close co-workers is Mr-lee. He is aroud 180cm tall, of thin buld and wears glasses. He has a black, straight, short hair. He is a always fashinable and looks smart! He is both intelligent and a thoughtful person. He takes initiative and sets a good examplte to employees, as he has a strong work ethic and a strong sense of resposibility. He is in charge of maintaining and adjusting the cost estimation system as well as lecturing in the global manager education course. Without a dout, He is a typical samsung man. As a cowoker, I respect him and feel lucky to work alongside him. Although, I printed out our text book, I hope to take class regarding the topic I want to talk! Please review my scrip and correct my answe! Next Day I want to talk about my company product! Thanks! |
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| 담당강사 | JJ | 등록일 | 2014-05-08 |
| 첨삭 내용 | CORRECTION: 1. He is aroud 180cm tall, of thin buld and wears glasses. > He is around (spelling) 180cm tall, he is thin and he wears eye glasses. 2. He is a always fashinable and looks smart! > He is (eliminate article "a") always fashionable (spelling) and looks smart! 3. He takes initiative and sets a good examplte to employees, > He takes initiative and sets a good example (example) to employees, 4. Without a dout, He is a typical samsung man. > Without a doubt (spelling), he (small letter "H") is a typical samsung employee. 5. As a cowoker, I respect him and feel lucky to work alongside him. > As his co-worker (use "his" then eliminate article "a" and spelling of co-worker), I respect him and feel lucky to work with him. 6. Please review my scrip and correct my answe! Next Day I want to talk about my company product! Thanks! > Please review my script (spelling) and correct my errors. (use errors and use period instead of exclamation point). Next day, (small letter "D" and use comma) I want to talk about my company product! Thanks!
Hi there Jung, Thank you for always writing here. I am happy that you are always open to my corrections. Of course, you can choose the topic that you want. Just let me know what topic you would like to discuss, okay? Take care and talk to you tomorrow! Teacher Jj |
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