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제목 5 free days in a row 등록일 2014-05-08
내용 I've got 5 free days in a low.
It' was a long break!
I felt less guilty about taking naps.
I traveled to YouSu with my family members.
We went to eat out famous foods in YouSu every days.
I was happy to be there with my family only.
My two kids said that it was wonderful tour.
But, it is harder to go back to work.
담당강사 Gail 등록일 2014-05-09
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I've got 5 free days in a low.

> I've got 5 free days in a row.

 It was a long break! I felt less guilty about taking naps. = good sentence

I traveled to YouSu with my family members. = good sentence

We went to eat out famous foods in YouSu every days.

> We went out to eat foods which Yosu is known for.

I was happy to be there with my family only.

> I was happy to be with my family.

My two kids said that it was wonderful tour.

> My two kids said that it was a  wonderful tour.

But, it is harder to go back to work.= good sentence

 

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