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제목 | 5 free days in a row | 등록일 | 2014-05-08 |
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내용 | I've got 5 free days in a low. It' was a long break! I felt less guilty about taking naps. I traveled to YouSu with my family members. We went to eat out famous foods in YouSu every days. I was happy to be there with my family only. My two kids said that it was wonderful tour. But, it is harder to go back to work. |
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담당강사 | Gail | 등록일 | 2014-05-09 |
첨삭 내용 | I've got 5 free days in a low. > I've got 5 free days in a row. It was a long break! I felt less guilty about taking naps. = good sentence I traveled to YouSu with my family members. = good sentence We went to eat out famous foods in YouSu every days. > We went out to eat foods which Yosu is known for. I was happy to be there with my family only. > I was happy to be with my family. My two kids said that it was wonderful tour. > My two kids said that it was a wonderful tour. But, it is harder to go back to work.= good sentence
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