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제목 | My favorite actor. | 등록일 | 2014-05-11 |
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내용 | I like 원빈 the most. who is Korean actor. He is talented and handsome I like his movies and I think he has a strong character in his movies. Recently he got divorced and the split must be tough for me but he does his best in a new movie. I think that is professionalism. I think he is a great actor because Last week, I watched his movie; it had everything such as an exciting story line, great actions, and so on. I think he know how to entertain the fans. I really like him so much. Next time, His new movie release, I will go to see a movie with my wife who likes him too. I think…. That’s about it. |
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담당강사 | Elizabeth2 | 등록일 | 2014-05-14 |
첨삭 내용 | Thank you for this Ben! Nice work!
Corrections: I like 원빈 the most. He is a (famous) Korean actor. He is talented and handsome and I like all of his movies. He always plays/portrays a strong character in his movies. Recently he got divorced. I'm sure the split is tough for him but he does his best the new movie he is in. I think that is a sign of his professionalism. I think he is a great actor because of this characteristic/trait that he so clearly possesses. Last week, I saw a movie he was in. It had everything a good movie needs, such as an exciting story line, great action sequences, and so on. I think he really knows how to entertain his fans! I really like him a lot. When his newest movie releases in theaters, I will go to see it with my wife who likes him too. :)
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