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제목 | What is around your workplace? | 등록일 | 2014-05-12 |
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내용 | My company is located in business district. There are so many buildings near my office. So When you look outside my office window, all you can see are buildings, buildings, and buildings. And there is an Olympic park near my office. It takes about 5minutes on foot. So I usually go there after take for lunch. As you know, Olympic park is biggest park in KOREA. So many people come to the park and take pictures. I Also like to go this park and enjoy jogging at there. Moreover, there is LOTTE department store near my office. Actually I love to visit there because they sell a lot of good things. Such as Clothes, furniture, shoes etc… If you visit my country I really want to recommend you to visit my office. |
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담당강사 | Bree | 등록일 | 2014-05-12 |
첨삭 내용 | My company is located in business district. There are so many buildings nearby my office. So When you look outside my office window, all you can see are buildings, buildings, and buildings. And there is an Olympic park near my office. It takes about 5minutes on foot. So I usually go there after lunch. As you know, Olympic park is the biggest park in KOREA. So many people go to this park just to take pictures. I also like going to this park and jog. Moreover, there is LOTTE department store nearby my office. Actually I love to visit there because they sell a lot of good things such as Clothes, furniture, shoes etc… If you visit my country I really recommend you to visit my office. |