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제목 My Stress 등록일 2014-05-13
내용 I have little stress to say about.
First stress is a financial problem. In this month, there are many events such as parents' day, children's day etc. So, I should spend more money than in other normal months, and the spending went over my budget.
Second, I and my wife are trying to have our baby. It is large burden to us.

Most troubles or worries cannot be solved by our consideration. Then, it is wise to forget enjoying everyday life.
담당강사 Jasmine1 등록일 2014-05-14
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I have little stress to say talk about. First stress is a financial problem. In this month, there are many events such as parents' day, children's day etc. So, I should spend more money than in other normal months, and the spending went over my budget. Second, I and my wife are trying to have our baby. It is large burden to on us. Most troubles or  and worries cannot be solved by our consideration. Then Therefore, it is wise to forget enjoying everyday life.

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It's wise to forget enjoying everyday life? I hope I misunderstood you.

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