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제목 My thinking about Tatoo 등록일 2014-05-15
내용 Tatoo is a message or a way to express one's identity, character, thought, etc. In our society, any expressions about one's thought is enabled, and the tatoo is the same case. Through the tatoo, we can make my another image or express my thinking without talking.

However, tatoo has the negative points, too.
First of all, it is not easy to delete. If the children have the tatoo without deep considerations, it is recorded for all life. So, we should be cautious getting the tatoo in our skin.
담당강사 Jasmine1 등록일 2014-05-16
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Tattoo is a message or a way to express one's identity, character, thoughts (pl), etc. In our society, any expressions about one's thoughts (pl) is enabled, and the tattoos (pl) are is the same case. Through the tattoos (pl), we can make my another image or express my thinking  thoughts without talking.

However, tattoos have has the negative points, too. First of all, it is not easy to remove  delete. If the children get have the tattoos (pl)  without deep considerations, it is recorded for all their lives (pl). So, we should be cautious getting the tattoos (pl) in on our skin.

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-The spelling is tattoo (2 T's, 2O's) like Coffee (2 F's, 2 E's)

-For facts, we use plurals. Tattoos are the same case. Some people get tattoos in order to express themselves.

-Tattoo ON our skin. I think the textbook said "in", so I understand your confusion.

-The noun for think is "thought" as in "What are your thoughts on the matter?"

 

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