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| 제목 | My House | 등록일 | 2014-05-15 |
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| 내용 | The type of my house is a regualr apartment. There are 14 floors in the apartment and my house is located in 7th floor. I live in my house with my family. There are TV deck and audio deck in the livining room. There are a large bed and big closet in the sleeping room. |
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| 담당강사 | Brooke | 등록일 | 2014-05-15 |
| 첨삭 내용 | The type of my house is a regualr apartment. There are 14 floors in the apartment and my house is located in 7th floor. I live in my house with my family. There are TV deck and audio deck in the livining room. There are a large bed and big closet in the sleeping room.
1. There are 14 floors in the apartment and my house is located in 7th floor. --> There are 14 floors in the apartment and my house is located on the 7th floor. 2. There are a large bed and big closet in the sleeping room. --> There is a large bed and a big closet in the sleeping room.
Hi there Andrew!~ You did very well in writing your composition. Continue doing your best to improve your skills in writing. -Teacher Brooke:) |
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