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제목 I have hangover 등록일 2014-05-16
내용 I had staff dinner yesterday.
I drank more than usual last night.
I don't normally drink too much, so I had hangover.
But I was happy to talk with my co-workers.
I had two glasses of beer.
The beer really tasted good to me!
How taste is it!
The pub was like German's pub.
I want to go there again.
담당강사 Gail 등록일 2014-05-19
첨삭 내용

I had staff dinner yesterday. = good sentence

I drank more than usual last night.   = good sentence

I don't normally drink too much, so I had hangover.
> so I had a hangover.

But I was happy to talk with my co-workers.

I had two glasses of beer.

The beer really tasted good to me!

How taste is it!

> How good it is!

The pub was like German's pub.

> The pub was like a  German's pub.

I want to go there again.

Nicole,

Thanks for sedning me a letter. I hope you have more coming so you can share your thoughts with me as our time in teh class is very limited.

Talk to you in the class!

 

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