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| 제목 | Korea weather traits | 등록일 | 2014-05-19 |
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| 내용 | Korea has four disdinct seasons. Spring is a lovely season. It's warm and pleasant with occasinal showers. Unfortunately, a lot of the yellow dust blows in from China at that time. In spring, People love to see the cheery blossoms and there are some very famous place to do this. Summer is hot and humid as this is monsoon season. I think the weather is too hot at this time of the year. In summer, children like to go swimming in the sea or go to a water park such as Caribbean Bay. Sometimes Korean like to eat Giseng chicken on hot summer days! Fall is wonderful. There are cool breeze and it stops rainnig. In fall, it's great time for hiking because the leaves chang color on the mountainside. Winter is vet dry. We have to use humidifiers during this season. Outside it is often below freezing and occasinally there is snow. Winter is ski season and the moutains are covered with snow. |
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| 담당강사 | JJ | 등록일 | 2014-05-22 |
| 첨삭 내용 | CORRECTION: 1. Korea has four disdinct seasons. > Korea has four distinct (spelling) seasons. 2. It's warm and pleasant with occasinal showers. > It's warm and pleasant with occassional (spelling) showers. 3. Unfortunately, a lot of the yellow dust blows in from China at that time. In spring, > Unfortunately, there's a lot of yellow dust that comes from China during spring. 4. In spring, People love to see the cheery blossoms and there are some very famous place to do this. > In spring, people (small letter "p") love to see the cheery blossoms and there are some very famous place to do this. 5. Sometimes Korean like to eat Giseng chicken on hot summer days! > Sometimes, (comma) Koreans (put "s") like to eat Giseng chicken on hot summer days! 6. There are cool breeze and it stops rainnig. > There is a cool breeze and it's not raining. 7. In fall, it's great time for hiking because the leaves chang color on the mountainside. > It's a great time for hiking in fall because the leaves change (spelling) color on the mountainside. 8. Winter is vet dry. > Winter is very (spelling) dry.
Hello Yeong, It's really a pleasure to always read your note and correct it at the same time. It's really good to know that you find time to write here and find time to read the corrections. I really salute students like you! Keep on improving Yeong! Please be careful with your spelling next time. I noticed that you commit errors with your spelling. Be careful next time,okay?
Teacher Jj |
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