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| 제목 | My Neighborhood | 등록일 | 2014-05-19 |
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| 내용 | I have lived in SeongNam si, Bundang Gu since 2001. My vilage name is MokRyun which means "magnolia" flower. My neighborhood is usually quiet and calm because it is somewhat distant from downtown area. My favorite site is Maeng-san mountain and my family often go to climb this mountain from spring to autumn season. There is Sang-top elementry scholl which is my second daughter's school near my house. It is the best place for biking and playing with my kids. I love my neighborhood because it makes me relaxed and calm when I am staying at home. |
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| 담당강사 | Brooke | 등록일 | 2014-05-20 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I have lived in SeongNam, Bundang Gu since 2001. My village's name is MokRyun which means "magnolia" flower. My neighborhood is usually quiet and calm because it is somewhat distant from downtown area. My favorite site is Maeng-san mountain and my family often go to climb this mountain from spring to autumn season. There is Sang-top elementry scholl which is my second daughter's school near my house. It is the best place for biking and playing with my kids. I love my neighborhood because it makes me relaxed and calm when I am staying at home.
---> My village's name is MokRyun which means "magnolia" flower.
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I am so impressed with your progress in writing. Continue doing your best. Have a great night!~ |
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