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| 제목 | The status of mobilephone is very bad. so I can't teacher's voice. | 등록일 | 2014-05-19 |
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| 내용 | The status of mobilephone is very bad. so I can't teacher's voice. Teacher make a call again, but I can't your voice. maybe status of mobile commucation is unstable. Have a nice evening. See you tomorrow. |
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| 담당강사 | Dwayne | 등록일 | 2014-05-20 |
| 첨삭 내용 | The status of mobilephone is very bad. so I can't teacher's voice. Teacher make a call again, but I can't your voice. maybe status of mobile commucation is unstable. Have a nice evening. See you tomorrow. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The connection of mobile phone was very bad so I can't hear teacher's voice. Teacher called again but still I can't hear his voice. Maybe the connection was unstable. Have a nice evening. See you tomorrow. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I apologize for what happened last night. I'll call you later. Have a nice afternoon. |
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