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제목 | My neighbors | 등록일 | 2014-05-23 |
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내용 | My village name is MokRyun which is magnolia flower. I live in an apartment. There 14 floors in the apartment and my house is on 7th floor. Mainly, I often come across my neighbors in the elevator. As I know, the husband is a school teacher and I don't know the wife's job. I didn't ask there ages but they must be older than ours. Actually we didn't have a chance to talk about the personal things. Sometimes we give some presents like korean cake or special foods to them on special days If possible, I like to have a chance to know each other. thanks |
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담당강사 | Brooke | 등록일 | 2014-05-23 |
첨삭 내용 | My village name is MokRyun which is magnolia flower. I live in an apartment. There 14 floors in the apartment and my house is on 7th floor. Mainly, I often come across my neighbors in the elevator. As I know, the husband is a school teacher and I don't know the wife's job. I didn't ask there ages but they must be older than ours. Actually we didn't have a chance to talk about the personal things. Sometimes we give some presents like korean cake or special foods to them on special days If possible, I like to have a chance to know each other. thanks
1. My village name is MokRyun which is magnolia flower. ---> My village's name is MokRyun which means "magnolia flower." 2. There 14 floors in the apartment and my house is on 7th floor. ---> There are 14 floors in the apartment and my house is on the 7th floor. 3. Actually we didn't have a chance to talk about the personal things. ----> Actually, we didn't have a chance to talk about personal 4. Sometimes we give some presents like korean cake or special foods to them on special days If possible, I like to have a chance to know each other. thanks ----> Sometimes, we give some presents like Korean cake or special foods to them on special days If possible, I like to have a chance to know each other. Thanks.
Hi there Adrew!~^^
You did pretty well in making sentences. Continue to enhance your skills. Please take note of my corrections. Have a great weekend!~ -Teacher Brooke-^_^ |