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제목 guppies 등록일 2014-05-27
내용 I bought two fishes whose name is guppy yesterday. I already had taken guppies a few years ago.

However it was not easy to take care of them.

Yesterday, my daughters really wanted to buy them. So they got them with their own money.

Now, I’m worry about that I treat them myself such as change water and clean the cage of fish.

I bought some stuffs online yesterday such as new cage, feeds for snails, and so on.

I think that my daughters make my house small zoo park.
담당강사 Elizabeth2 등록일 2014-06-03
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I bought two fish yesterday and named them both "Guppy". I had already bought some guppies a few years ago/back. However, it was not that easy to take care of them. However, yesterday my daughters really wanted to buy some so I gave in. They got them with their own money. But now, I’m worried that I will have to take care of them myself by changing their water and cleaning the aquarium. I bought some stuff online yesterday such as a new cage, snail food, and so on. I think that my daughters are turning my house into small zoo!

 

 

Nice work Ben!!

-Teacher Elizabeth

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