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제목 | Disadvantages of the Telecommuting | 등록일 | 2014-05-27 |
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내용 | Telecommuting is not attractive system to the employers. They cannot check or monitor the attendance of their employees. Without the supervision from the manager, most employees do not focus on their works. Communication among colleagues is not effective, too. That is, the performance or efficiency of the working decreases. To the employees, telecommuting is very attractive system. However, owing to the problems that i said, many employers reluctant to accept this system. So, telecommuting jobs are available to the routine work such as counselling, writing books or designers. Most of telecommuting jobs provide low salary, too. |
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담당강사 | Jasmine1 | 등록일 | 2014-05-27 |
첨삭 내용 | Telecommuting is not an attractive system to the employers. They cannot check or monitor the attendance of their employees. Without the supervision from the managers (pl), most employees do not focus on their work To the employees, telecommuting is a very attractive system. However, owing to the problems that I said, many employers are reluctant to accept this system. So, telecommuting jobs are available ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1) Work meaning jobs or assignments is uncountable. It should never be written as "works" 2) "Routine jobs such as designers" is a fine sentence, but you want to words to match |