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제목 | The social and economic impact of High Speed Train | 등록일 | 2014-06-05 |
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내용 | As the high speed train is adopted to Korea, it has become enable to go anywhere within 3 hours in Korea. It has changed our life in many points. First, many people enjoy trvel more than at the past, which increases the travel market and activates domestic industry. Especially, KTX moves using elcetricity, so it is helpful for energy efficiency and environmental preservation. Second, it is enable to commute long distance using KTX. That induces the development of the provinces. |
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담당강사 | Jasmine1 | 등록일 | 2014-06-09 |
첨삭 내용 | As the high speed train is adopted First, many people enjoy travel more than Second, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1) Enable--(v) to make able 2) Second, it is enable to commute long distance using KTX. |