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제목 hi Aileen 등록일 2014-06-09
내용 hi Aileen
I'm yeol..
I guess you are distressed because of my english.^^;;
I'm sorry can't speak english & listening very well. but I can read a little.
Do you live in seoul? I live in seoul.
I feel tired today. becaues holiday is finished.
Do you like soccer?or baseball??
I look forward to worldcup. I want to go to brazil but there is far from korea.
and i need a lot money. so i can't go ㅜㅜ
I talk nonsense..ha ha..have a nice day.
Thank you
담당강사 Aileen 등록일 2014-06-10
첨삭 내용

hi Aileen I'm yeol.. I guess you are distressed because of my english.^^;; I'm sorry can't speak english & listening very well. but I can read a little. Do you live in seoul? I live in seoul. I feel tired today. becaues holiday is finished. Do you like soccer?or baseball?? I look forward to worldcup. I want to go to brazil but there is far from korea. and i need a lot money. so i can't go ㅜㅜ I talk nonsense..ha ha..have a nice day. Thank you

CORRECTIONS:

I guess you are distressed because of my english.

-> I guess you are distressed because of my English.

I'm sorry can't speak english & listening very well. but I can read a little.

-> I'm sorry, I can't speak English and I can't listen very well, but I can read a little.

Do you live in seoul?

-> Do you live in Seoul?

I live in seoul.

-> I live in Seoul.

I feel tired today. becaues holiday is finished.

-> I feel tired today. because holiday is just finished.

Do you like soccer?or baseball??

-> Do you like soccer or baseball?

I look forward to worldcup.

-> I looking forward to Worldcup.

I want to go to brazil but there is far from korea.

-> I want to go to Brazil but that is far from Korea.

and i need a lot money. so i can't go

-> I need a lot of money, so I can't go.

I talk nonsense..ha ha..have a nice day.

-> I talked nonsense. haha.. Have a nice day!

 

COMMENTS:

Hi Yeol!

I'm happy to see your message. I am not distressed by you. I understand your situation Yeol, I know that it's not easy for you. However, I believe we can help each other. Let's just practice and be cooperative with me, okay? :)

I am from Philippines and I live in Manila. Have you been here? I like basketball more than soccer. Basketball is the most popular sports here, but ofcourse we are also interested with soccer.

Thank you for your message. See you! :)

~T. Aileen :)

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