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제목 | hi Aileen | 등록일 | 2014-06-09 |
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내용 | hi Aileen I'm yeol.. I guess you are distressed because of my english.^^;; I'm sorry can't speak english & listening very well. but I can read a little. Do you live in seoul? I live in seoul. I feel tired today. becaues holiday is finished. Do you like soccer?or baseball?? I look forward to worldcup. I want to go to brazil but there is far from korea. and i need a lot money. so i can't go ㅜㅜ I talk nonsense..ha ha..have a nice day. Thank you |
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담당강사 | Aileen | 등록일 | 2014-06-10 |
첨삭 내용 | hi Aileen I'm yeol.. I guess you are distressed because of my english.^^;; I'm sorry can't speak english & listening very well. but I can read a little. Do you live in seoul? I live in seoul. I feel tired today. becaues holiday is finished. Do you like soccer?or baseball?? I look forward to worldcup. I want to go to brazil but there is far from korea. and i need a lot money. so i can't go ㅜㅜ I talk nonsense..ha ha..have a nice day. Thank you CORRECTIONS: I guess you are distressed because of my english. -> I guess you are distressed because of my English. I'm sorry can't speak english & listening very well. but I can read a little. -> I'm sorry, I can't speak English and I can't listen very well, but I can read a little. Do you live in seoul? -> Do you live in Seoul? I live in seoul. -> I live in Seoul. I feel tired today. becaues holiday is finished. -> I feel tired today. because holiday Do you like soccer?or baseball?? -> Do you like soccer or baseball? I look forward to worldcup. -> I looking forward to Worldcup. I want to go to brazil but there is far from korea. -> I want to go to Brazil but that is far from Korea. and i need a lot money. so i can't go -> I need a lot of money, so I can't go. I talk nonsense..ha ha..have a nice day. -> I talked nonsense. haha.. Have a nice day!
COMMENTS: Hi Yeol! I'm happy to see your message. I am not distressed by you. I understand your situation Yeol, I know that it's not easy for you. However, I believe we can help each other. Let's just practice and be cooperative with me, okay? :) I am from Philippines and I live in Manila. Have you been here? I like basketball more than soccer. Basketball is the most popular sports here, but ofcourse we are also interested with soccer. Thank you for your message. See you! :) ~T. Aileen :) |