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제목 Work(LunchTime) 등록일 2014-06-10
내용 I usually have an hour for lunch break. it usually starts at noon and ends at 1 o’clock in the afternoon.
by that time, I go to the company cafeteria with coworkers in my department.
the company cafeteria serves 3 style menus for lunch. the 3 style menus is consists of the korean, western and chinese food.
so, I can choice one menu among the 3 style menus.
I tend to prefer Korean food. because I think the korean food is lighter on my stomach than the western or chinese food.
After eating, I stop by the park to enjoy walking with my closest coworker and I. we like to talk about our company because it is something we have in common.
담당강사 Don 등록일 2014-06-12
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I usually have an hour for lunch break. (Good sentence)

it usually starts at noon and ends at 1 o’clock in the afternoon.

-> It usually starts at noon and ends at 1 o’clock in the afternoon. (Start your sentence with capital I.)

by that time, I go to the company cafeteria with coworkers in my department.

-> By that time, I go to the company cafeteria with coworkers in my department. (Start your sentence with capital B.)

the company cafeteria serves 3 style menus for lunch.

-> The company cafeteria serves 3 style menus for lunch. (Start your sentence with capital T.)

the 3 style menus is consists of the korean, western and chinese food. so, I can choice one menu among the 3 style menus.

-> The 3 style menus is consist of the Korean, Western and Chinese food so I can choose one menu among the 3 style menus. (Start with capital T and use CHOOSE since it's a verb.)

I tend to prefer Korean food. because I think the korean food is lighter on my stomach than the western or chinese food.

-> I tend to prefer Korean food because I think the Korean food is lighter on my stomach than the Western or Chinese food. (Use capital letters for proper nouns and remove THE.)

After eating, I stop by the park to enjoy walking with my closest coworker and I.

-> After eating, I stop by the park to enjoy walking with my closest coworker. and I. (You can remove "and I" since you already used I as your subject.)

we like to talk about our company because it is something we have in common.

-> We like to talk about our company because it is something we have in common. (Start your sentence with capital W.)

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