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제목 | Work(LunchTime) | 등록일 | 2014-06-10 |
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내용 | I usually have an hour for lunch break. it usually starts at noon and ends at 1 o’clock in the afternoon. by that time, I go to the company cafeteria with coworkers in my department. the company cafeteria serves 3 style menus for lunch. the 3 style menus is consists of the korean, western and chinese food. so, I can choice one menu among the 3 style menus. I tend to prefer Korean food. because I think the korean food is lighter on my stomach than the western or chinese food. After eating, I stop by the park to enjoy walking with my closest coworker and I. we like to talk about our company because it is something we have in common. |
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담당강사 | Don | 등록일 | 2014-06-12 |
첨삭 내용 | I usually have an hour for lunch break. (Good sentence) it usually starts at noon and ends at 1 o’clock in the afternoon. -> It usually starts at noon and ends at 1 o’clock in the afternoon. (Start your sentence with capital I.) by that time, I go to the company cafeteria with coworkers in my department. -> By that time, I go to the company cafeteria with coworkers in my department. (Start your sentence with capital B.) the company cafeteria serves 3 style menus for lunch. -> The company cafeteria serves 3 style menus for lunch. (Start your sentence with capital T.) the 3 style menus is consists of the korean, western and chinese food. so, I can choice one menu among the 3 style menus. -> The 3 style menus I tend to prefer Korean food. because I think the korean food is lighter on my stomach than the western or chinese food. -> I tend to prefer Korean food because I think After eating, I stop by the park to enjoy walking with my closest coworker and I. -> After eating, I stop by the park to enjoy walking with my closest coworker. we like to talk about our company because it is something we have in common. -> We like to talk about our company because it is something we have in common. (Start your sentence with capital W.) |