In fact, I have been keeping a pet for years. To be more specific, it is a five-year-old poodle, which has brightly white fur. I feel she is a member of my family and I do love her so much. I believe she is a very special dog in many ways. First of all, she is very gentle to anyone, especially to kids. I would say when someone is coming across her; they would fall in love with her in no time. She also seems to be talented in showcasing attractive skills like ball-catching and jumping, even though she has never been trained. Another thing that I shouldn't forget is that she is quite clever as far as I'm concerned. She can even sometimes open a door after several trials. Despite that it demands lots of financial burden to keep a pet like dogs and cats, I would like to highly recommend to anyone to raise a pet. I guess it has more good  better effects than harm, like the sense of caring and feeling of having someone to lean on. I hope she could live as long as possible with me for heaven's sake.

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Hi Sean! You posted your composition after a long time. Your composition is good, however minimal lapses were noted specifically with your verbs. Nevertheless you still have a good composition. Keep it up!

- Teacher Ida^^