[CORRECTION]

I want to travel to Bali, Indonesia next year. When I go there, I will visit Bali, eat every food, take lots of pictures, and go surfing. I learned surfing last month. So it was very fun. I can still feel the sea wave. To go to Bali, I must save money to prepare traveling expenses and buy the ticket. Also, I must study English very hard. I'm looking forward to going there very much.

[COMMENT]

Hello, Aaron!

Thanks for writing about your New Year's Resolution. I would like to go to Bali, Indonesia too. It's a very beautiful place. It's like a paradise. I hope that you'll enjoy your vacation there. Anyway, kindly take note the corrections that I made for you above.

Have a nice day,

Teacher Mitch ^-^