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| 제목 | neighborhood | 등록일 | 2014-06-12 |
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| 내용 | Because I am so busy, I usually leave my apartment early in the morning and come back so late at night. Therefore, I don't see my neighbors often. But I was temporary resting now from office for upbringing of infants from feburary 2013 for 15 months. During that time, I met many neighbors around my apartment. They have one or two babies like me. One of them has two children and their ages are same to my two daughters. So they play with eachother. Ofcourse I like her very much. our second doughter were born 20th and 21 th on feburary 2013. because of that reason I became close with her family. We talked about many things about education, trip, money and so on. She often introduces me some other people. Unfortunately I have to comeback to my company last month. So I rarely meet her, but last night I met and talked with her in beer restaurant. I had realy happy time. |
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| 담당강사 | Philip | 등록일 | 2014-06-12 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Because I am so busy, I usually leave my apartment early in the morning and come back so late at night. -> Good sentence Therefore, I don't see my neighbors often. -> Good sentence But I was temporary resting now from office for upbringing of infants from feburary 2013 for 15 months. -> But I am temporarily resting now from the office to raise infants since Feburary 2013 for 15 months. During that time, I met many neighbors around my apartment. -> Good sentence They have one or two babies like me. -> Good sentence One of them has two children and their ages are same to my two daughters. -> One of them has two children and their ages are the same as my two daughters. So they play with eachother. -> So they play together. Ofcourse I like her very much. -> Of course I like her very much. our second doughter were born 20th and 21 th on feburary 2013. -> Our second doughter was born betwen the 20th and 21st of Feburary 2013. because of that reason I became close with her family. -> Because of that We talked about many things about education, trip, money and so on. -> We talk She often introduces me some other people. -> She often introduces me to other people. Unfortunately I have to comeback to my company last month. -> Good sentence So I rarely meet her, but last night I met and talked with her in beer restaurant. -> So I rarely meet her, but last night I met and talked with her in a beer restaurant. I had realy happy time. -> I had really happy time.
================================================================================================================================= Hello Lisa, Finding a good friend is hard and often times a good friend knows that distance is not a problem. I think your neighbor is a good friend. Thank you for sharing a your story and in our life full of stress and work, it is indeed a treasure to find a good soul to share life with. Take care! Teacher Philip |
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