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제목 Listening to Music 등록일 2014-06-13
내용 There are many group singers and singles artists in Korea. Nowadays, the popular music trend is K-pop. Many idol groups are coming out but I like an old singer called GOD. They are made up 2 singers and also 2 rappers. Their lead vocal is tall and has a soulful singing voice. I think his range is good so he can sing low notes as well as high notes. I liked this group because I think they are relatable celebrities. They are down to earth and they like to have fun with their fans during concerts. They sing a variety of different genres because they are talented. I like their dance songs because they are very exciting and are good to dance to. In addition their musical talent, they have a good sense about TV show. One of the TV show they make an appearance is very memorable to me. The TV show is about caring a baby, as his parents. I felt their humanism watching the TV show. They got the best singer award a few times. Lately, they came back again in almost 12years. So I expect very much!
담당강사 Chloe1 등록일 2014-06-13
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Hello Jake! I hope that you will have a great Friday evening and a happy weekend. Here are your corrections. ^_^

 

There are many group singers and single artists in Korea. Nowadays, the popular music trend is K-pop. Many idol groups are coming out, but I like an old singer called GOD. They are made up of 2 singers and also 2 rappers. Their lead vocalist is tall and has a soulful singing voice. I think his range of voice is good so he can sing low notes as well as high notes. I like this group because I think they can connect their lives to their fans. They are down to earth and they like to have fun with their fans during concerts. They sing a variety of different genres because they are talented. I like their songs that have an up-beat tune that can be used as a material for dancing because they are very exciting and are good to dance to. In addition to their musical talent is that they can be seen is several TV shows. One of the TV shows that they had an appearance is very memorable for me. The TV show was about caring a baby, as his parents. I felt their humanism watching the TV show. They got the best singer award for several times. Lately, they came back again after 12 years. So I expect a lot from them now!

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