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제목 Playing games 등록일 2014-06-16
내용 I usually played games when I was in elementary and middle school. I did it on my laptop. The game was “Starcraft”. It was very interesting. The interface of game was complicated. That’s why it was difficult for me to play the game first time. Even, my friends didn’t teach it, they just played their own game. Anyway, I practiced it by myself, I understood how to play the game. If we understood it perfectly, we could make a variety of game strategies. There were 3 tribes in the game. We could choose the tribes before starting game. The 3 tribes had strong and weak points each. We always waited for the after class. As soon as class finished, we ran to PC game room. That is a memorable memory to me. But nowadays the game trend is changed. The games that a lot of people play on these days need Smartphone. Many my friends play games on their Smartphone. The kinds of games are popular with many people because it is linked to popular SNS mediums such as Kakaotalk and facebook.
담당강사 Chloe1 등록일 2014-06-16
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I usually played games when I was in elementary and middle school. I did it on my laptop. The game was “Starcraft”. It was very interesting. The interface of game was complicated. That’s why it was difficult for me to play the game at first. Myfriends didn't teach me how to play that game. They also learned playing it by themselves. Anyway, I practiced it by myself. I understood how to play the game by myself. If we understood it perfectly, we could make a variety of game strategies. There were 3 tribes in the game. We could choose the tribes before starting the game. The 3 tribes had strong and weak points each. We always waited for that after class. As soon as class the finished, we ran to the PC game room. That is a memorable experience for me. But nowadays the game trend has changed. The games that a lot of people play on these days need Smartphones. Many of my friends play games on their Smartphones. Those kinds of games are popular to many people because it is linked to popular SNS mediums such as Kakaotalk and facebook.

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