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제목 Good afternoon. 등록일 2014-06-16
내용 I want to say a lot in my head, but not my tongue. haha

Your voice is young like 20 age. My age is 35. T.T. I'm older than you.

You know a lot of Korean. Do you like K-pop?

I wonder that K-POP & Kdrama is poplular in the world. That is mystery.

I'm ready to touring for you. You need a only airplain ticket.

Other cost is on me. haha. If the ticket is expensive, you will board a low cost airplain.

And then. You should teach English for me. haha

I question that if this class will be end, How I contact to you?

If I will alpply other class, What is the class?

I want to study the class teaching you.

Have a nice day~^^
담당강사 Aileen 등록일 2014-06-17
첨삭 내용

I want to say a lot in my head, but not my tongue. haha Your voice is young like 20 age. My age is 35. T.T. I'm older than you. You know a lot of Korean. Do you like K-pop? I wonder that K-POP & Kdrama is poplular in the world. That is mystery. I'm ready to touring for you. You need a only airplain ticket. Other cost is on me. haha. If the ticket is expensive, you will board a low cost airplain. And then. You should teach English for me. haha I question that if this class will be end, How I contact to you? If I will alpply other class, What is the class? I want to study the class teaching you. Have a nice day~^^

 CORRECTIONS:

Your voice is young like 20 age.

-> Your voice sounds young, you sound like 20 years old.

You know a lot of Korean.

-> You know a lot about Koreans.

I wonder that K-POP & Kdrama is poplular in the world. That is mystery.

-> I wonder why K-POP and Korean dramas are poplular in the world, that is mystery.

 I'm ready to touring for you.

->  I'm ready, I will tour you.

You need a only airplain ticket. Other cost is on me.

-> You only need an only airplane ticket to Korea, other expenses are on me.

If the ticket is expensive, you will board a low cost airplain. 

-> If the ticket is expensive, you have to find cheaper airplane ticket.

And then. You should teach English for me.

-> After that, you should teach me English.

I question that if this class will be end, How I contact to you?

-> I have a question, after the class, how I contact you?

If I will alpply other class, What is the class?

-> If I will alpply to other classes, what will be the topics?

I want to study the class teaching you. 

-> I want to study with  you as my teacher.

 

COMMENTS:

Hi Yeol! Another message from you. :) You are so kind! Thank you for that. However, it's really expensive to go abroad. It will take time for me.

During our class, you don't have to be nervous. Just be comfortable, and say anything you want. Don't be so conscious of your grammar. I will help you with your grammar and I will correct your sentence when needed. Okay? We will do this, so you will practice your speaking skills and grammar skills.

Again, thank you for being interested with our class. Take care!

~T. Aileen :)

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