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제목 | Watching Movies | 등록일 | 2014-06-17 |
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내용 | I hate horror and mystery movies. I usually like almost kinds of movies but I cannot watch horror movies and mystery movies. The reason I cannot watch horror movies is that it helps nothing for my life. the scene from a Horror movie is so gruesome and nauseous. so, if I watch horror movies, I can’t get the images out of my mind. Also, I dislike mystery movies. because I don’t want to use my brains for watch movies. Anyway I don’t remember when I watched horror and mystery movies. and I don’t want to watch these movies. |
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담당강사 | Don | 등록일 | 2014-06-18 |
첨삭 내용 | I hate horror and mystery movies. (Good sentence) I usually like almost kinds of movies but I cannot watch horror movies and mystery movies. -> I usually like almost all kinds of movies but I cannot watch horror movies and mystery movies. (Add ALL after almost for it shows diversity.) The reason I cannot watch horror movies is that it helps nothing for my life. -> The reason why I cannot watch horror movies is that it helps nothing in my life. (Add WHY for you're giving a reason, also use IN as your preposition.) the scene from a Horror movie is so gruesome and nauseous. so, if I watch horror movies, I can’t get the images out of my mind. -> The scene from a horror movie is so gruesome and nauseous so if I watch horror movies, I can’t get the images out of my mind. (Take note of the words that you need to capitalized. Also, remove the PERIOD and COMMA before and after the word SO.) Also, I dislike mystery movies. because I don’t want to use my brains for watch movies. -> Also, I dislike mystery movies because I don’t want to use my brain Anyway I don’t remember when I watched horror and mystery movies and I don’t want to watch these movies. (Goode sentence, just remove PERIOD before the word AND.) |