I like going to exciting concerts with electronic music DJs.

-> Good sentence

I like going to clubs.

-> Good sentence

Therefore, I like to see the DJ concerts because they remind me of the club.

-> Good sentence

I usually enjoy these conserts with my friends.

-> I usually enjoy these concerts with my friends.

I have some college friends who I usually go to these concerts with.

-> Good sentence

They also like electronic music.

-> Good sentence

I like to watch the concert in the very front.

-> I like to watch the concert at the very front.

It is very expensive, so I can't go often but it is much valuable than money.

-> It is very expensive, so I can't go often but it is much more valuable than money.

Most of the time, these concerts have an open dance floor near the front.

-> Good sentence

I like standing on the open floor in the front because that is where all the action is.

-> Good sentence

We can dance and jump up to the music.

-> Good sentence

It is very exciting there with my friends and it feels like I become one with a group

-> Good sentence

I usually have to buy thos tickets when they first start to go on sale.

-> I usually have to buy those tickets when they first start to go on sale.

I have to buy them early because the open floor tickets sell out quickly.

-> Good sentence

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Hello Lisa,

It seems you are a party girl and you know how to have fun during a concert. In this response you wrote about concerts you were able to explain well and with interesting sentences on how you enjoy concerts. I also like concert but I prefer the classic and boring ones more.

Keep up the good work!

Teacher Philip