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I think there are some pros and cons about walking outside. The first benefit of walking outside is that it is good for your health. Nowadays, people do exercise only a little to take care about their own health. This is a very serious problem to people nowadays. Deficient exercise causes health problems like getting fat. If you walk outside regularly, you can be healthy. Another good thing is that you can look at the good scenery outside while walking. There is a river near my house. I usually go there when I need healing. The river view is beautiful. It makes me feel refreshed. However, it is always not good. There are some negatives about walking outside. You have to check whether it will  rain or snow. Also, if the weather is bad. I have to give up walking outside or prepare a health mask to block the dust from getting inside my lungs. With the proper preparation, it’s not bad to walk outside because I can save money to go to the gym and enjoy the nice scenery.