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| 제목 | I feel depressed, but.. | 등록일 | 2014-06-23 |
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| 내용 | You know that we're having the world cup season these days. I watched the soccer game between Korea and Algeria in the early morining. The Korean team was beaten too easily in the second round of the world cup. The Korean soccer players lost the game because they were under a great deal of their opponents's pressure from mid-field. I think they should seek for solutions to overcone that situation until next game. However, we are still in with a chance and it is not over yet. Like most Koreans, I'm looking forward to pull a surprise victory over the Belgian team on 27 June. Good Luck to Korean team. |
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| 담당강사 | Bree | 등록일 | 2014-06-24 |
| 첨삭 내용 | You know that the Wordl Cup is ongoing now. I watched the match between Korea and Algeria early this morning. The Korean team was easily beaten during the second round. The Korean team lost the game because they were pressured from the mid-field by their opponents. (two sentences can be combined in one because they share the same thought by using proper conjunction.) I think they should solve this problem before they play for the next game. However, we still have the chance to make it to the next level because it's not over for our team yet. Like most of Koreans, I'm also looking forward to a surprise victory over Belgian team on June 27. Good luck, Korean team.
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