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제목 | Self Introduction ~ | 등록일 | 2014-06-24 |
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내용 | My name is Cho jung sang and I'm forty one(41) years old. I am working at Information & Communication Technology related company and I am in Management Division. My job is to manage the payments and the compliance. I have carried out 'payment'jobs for almost 10 years, but Compliance is a new role. As, this is a new role, i am very much excited I enjoyed play TV game with my son and i'm interested in coin collection. i have been to three countries, among them chian, the coin did not see. Now that i think about it, i so was wondering why there are no coin. I usually go to work at ten past eight. My job is to manage the payment. I have done this for a long time, 10 years. After 10 years of long services, I needed some change in my job role to refresh myself. Now, I am in charge of Compliance. As this is a new role, I am very much excited. |
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담당강사 | Paula | 등록일 | 2014-06-26 |
첨삭 내용 | My name is Cho jung sang and I'm forty one(41) years old. I am working at Information & Communication Technology related company and I am in Management Division. My job is to manage the payments and the compliance. I have carried out 'payment'jobs for almost 10 years, but Compliance is a new role. As, this is a new role, i am very much excited I enjoyed play TV game with my son and i'm interested in coin collection. i have been to three countries, ->As, this is a new role, I am very much excited. I enjoy playing TV games with my son and I'm interested in coin collection. I had been to three countries. One of them is China but, I didn't find any coins. Now that I'm thinking about it, I was wondering why there are no coins. I usually go to work at ten past eight. -> I usually go to work at 8:10 in the morning. My job is to manage the payment. I have done this for a long time, 10 years. -> I'm doing this for 10 years. After 10 years of long services, I needed some change in my job role to refresh myself. Now, I am in charge of Compliance. As this is a new role, I am very much excited. -> After 10 years of long service, I needed some change in my job role to refresh myself. Now, I am in charge of Compliance. As this is a new role, I am very much excited. |