Hello Jake! Happy Friday! WOW! You are now improving a lot in making lengthy, correct and sensible sentences. I like to commend you for that. Keep up the good work! I hope that you will have a great Friday evening and a happy weekend. Here are your corrections. ^_^

I use the internet everyday because of my job. When I get tired from doing my work on the computer, I like to surf the Internet. These days, I have been interested in reading a book so I am looking for deals on books online. There is a book website that I'm using. The website has many good deals so it is fun to just shop there for fun. I usually search for many books and just read reviews and summaries. Our company gives me some points to use when I want to buy books, movie tickets, musical tickets, vehicle tickets and so on. That’s why I can use the points instead of paying cash. One day, my dad asked me a favor to buy him some books. So I ordered books online by using the points that our company gave me. My dad was so glad because I ordered books for him. Sometimes, I surf the Internet when I want to use the English dictionary to make perfect English sentences. I can find good expressions there too and I try to memorize them. I also like to surf the Internet at work to relieve my stress and take some time off from work.