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제목 Thank's got it Friday... 등록일 2014-06-27
내용 When I was a kid, we could clearly see the changes of four
different seasons; Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter.
Unfortunately, I can no longer recognize the differences of
these season changes.
The Spring and Autumns are disappeared, but only Summer and
Winter remains.
What it means that summer gets more hotter, and winter got more
colder, where we now see people face death due to these rapid
weather changes.

You know, my parents have a lot in common.
Although they don't always agree on things, they have great
respect for each other.
My dad is short and chubby, but my mother is tall and thin
담당강사 Paula 등록일 2014-06-30
첨삭 내용

When I was a kid, we could clearly see the changes of four different seasons; Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter. Unfortunately, I can no longer recognize the differences of these season changes. The Spring and Autumns are disappeared, but only Summer and Winter remains. What it means that summer gets more hotter, and winter got more colder, where we now see people face death due to these rapid weather changes.

-> When I was a kid, we could clearly see the changes of four different seasons; Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter. Unfortunately, I can no longer recognize the differences of these season. The Spring and Autumn disappeared, but only Summer and Winter remains. It means that summer gets more hotter, and winter gets more colder, we can see people facing death due to these rapid weather changes.

You know, my parents have a lot in common. Although they don't always agree on things, they have great respect for each other. My dad is short and chubby, but my mother is tall and thin.

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