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제목 Neighborhood (Role Play) 등록일 2014-06-27
내용 Where did you move to? I have moved a few times since I was born. I moved to Seoul when I was 3years old. At that time, I was just a baby. So I didn’t remember how I felt when I came to Seoul. Although I was not born in Seoul, I almost grew up in Seoul. I could learn Korean mother tongue not Korean slang. Even I moved several times only in Seoul. I didn’t move out other cities. That’s why I made many friends just in Seoul. What kind of facilities are near your new house? I moved to the house I live now 3 years ago. I liked my new neighborhood because there were some facilities like neighborhood clinic, many supermarkets and theaters. Thanks for theaters near my house, my family can usually enjoy watching movies. I think that it is more convenient living city than the suburbs because I have everything I need near my house. Which one do you like between old town and new town? I think there are some pros and cons. Anyway, I hope you love your new house and you make good memories there.
담당강사 Chloe1 등록일 2014-06-30
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Hello Jake! Happy Monday! I'm glad that you like the house where you moved in. Have a great day ahead! Here are your corrections. ^_^

 

Where did you move to? I have moved a few times since I was born. I moved to Seoul when I was 3 years old. At that time, I was just a baby. So I didn’t remember how I felt when I came to Seoul. Although, I was not born in Seoul, I almost grew up in Seoul. I could learn Korean native accent not Korean slang. I moved several times, but only in Seoul. I didn’t move out to other cities. That’s why I have lots of friends only in Seoul. What kind of facilities are there near your new house? I moved to the house that I live in now 3 years ago. I liked my new neighborhood because there are some facilities like neighborhood clinic, many supermarkets and theaters. Thanks for theaters near my house, My family can usually enjoy watching movies. I think that it is more convenient to live in the city than in the suburbs because I have everything I need near my house. Which one do you like better, an old town or new town? I think there are some pros and cons. Anyway, I hope you love your new house and you make good memories there.

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