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제목 | camping | 등록일 | 2014-07-02 |
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내용 | Hi, Robby I like going camping to the mountains with a nearby beach but my family don't go comping yet Because we don't have comping equipment Some camping ground are borrow equipment so we will try comping Instead of camping, we go to condominium useally Because company offer condominium to employee, we use it It is cheap and convenient |
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담당강사 | Roby | 등록일 | 2014-07-03 |
첨삭 내용 | Hi, Robby -> Hi Roby!
I like going camping to the mountains with a nearby beach. ->I like to go camping in mountains which are near the sea.
but my family don't go comping yet Because we don't have comping equipment. -> My family can't go camping because we don't have camping quipments yet.
Some camping ground are borrow equipment so we will try comping. -> We can borrow camping equipments on some camping grounds.
Instead of camping, we go to condominium useally Because company offer condominium to employee, we use it It is cheap and convenient ->Instead of camping, we go to a condiminium which is owned by the company and offered to the employee.It is cheap and more convenient for us.
Hi Genie! I am happy that you tried your best to do to answer the task well. Just be careful on your sentences. Just keep on doing your best!
Have a great day!
~Roby ;)
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