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| 제목 | Hello. My name is Jack. | 등록일 | 2014-07-03 |
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| 내용 | Dear, Teacher. Nice to meet you. I'm Jack. My original name is Lee jae-yeob. But, you can call me just Jack. I'm sorry that I didn't get your call yesterday. I forgot the class yester day. Because I was taking care of my baby crying. My baby was born just 50 days ago. Anyway, I appreciated having this class. I'm expecting to spend good time to improve myself through our class. Thank you. Sincerly yours. |
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| 담당강사 | Kat | 등록일 | 2014-07-03 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Dear, Teacher. Nice to meet you. - Good Sentence I'm Jack. My original name is Lee jae-yeob. - Good Sentence But, you can call me just Jack. = But, you can just call me Jack. I'm sorry that I didn't get your call yesterday. - Good Sentence I forgot the class yester day. - Good Sentence
My baby was born just 50 days ago. - Good Sentence Anyway, I appreciate Hi Jack! You're supposed to be my first student yesterday but you were absent. But it's okay because we still have more classes to come. I will do my best to help you enhance your communication skills. I'm looking forward to talking to you on Friday. Have a good day! Teacher Kat :) |
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