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제목 Do you remember what you learned in the last unit ? 등록일 2014-07-03
내용 I remember last lesson (Unit 7) was about the main task of a new employee's department.

His mentor explained clearly
the difference between the task of the General Affairs Department
and that of the IT Department.

In the end, he really thanked his mentor for her clear explanation.

I think that
I learned some expressions about the main task of each departments in the last lesson.
담당강사 Bree 등록일 2014-07-04
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I can remember our last lesson in Unit 7 was about the main tasks of the new employee's department.

His mentor explained to him clearly about the difference between the task of General Affairs Department and IT Department.

In the end he was really thankful to his mentor for his clear explanation.

I think I learned different expressions about the main tasks of each department in our last lesson.

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