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제목 To day's plan 등록일 2014-07-07
내용 Hello~

It is my pleasure to write letter in this site and read your corrections todays.

Today, I try to share my today's schedule with you simply.
I have an important job which should be finished until today.
It's making a presentation slides to use at the PT exam held by my company.
If I pass the exam, the dgree 3 certification will be awarded to me.
It will be beneficial when I am promoted in future.
I'll finish this job until 02:00PM.

After that I'll attend a conference with my project manager
There is also English class at 05:00PM.
This class proceeds go on offline.
I don't like this class.
My boss forced to join it to reduce the education cost.
Because the members share the cost. the more members would be the better.

After the class my daily procedure would be finished.
and I'll go my home to see my baby and wife.
They are so lovely that it's very enjoyable on my way to home.

That's all.
Thank you for reading my articles.
담당강사 Kat 등록일 2014-07-10
첨삭 내용

Hello~

It is my pleasure to write letter in this site and read your corrections todays. - It is my pleasure to write a letter in this site and read your corrections todays.

Today, I try to share my today's schedule with you simply. - Today, I would like to share my today's simple schedule for this day with you.

I have an important job which should be finished until today. - Good Sentence

It's making a presentation slides to use at the PT exam held by my company. - It's about making a presentation slides to be used at the PT exam that will be held by in our my company.

If I pass the exam, the dgree 3 certification will be awarded to me. - If I pass the exam, the third degree dgree 3 certification will be awarded to me.

It will be beneficial when I am promoted in future. - It will be beneficial if when I am going to be promoted in future

I'll finish this job until 02:00PM. After that I'll attend a conference with my project manager - I'll finish this job until 02:00PM. After that I'll attend a conference with my project manager.

There is also English class at 05:00PM. - I There is also have an English class at 05:00PM.

This class proceeds go on offline. - This class proceeds go on is an offline class.

I don't like this class. - Good Sentence

My boss forced to join it to reduce the education cost. - My boss forced me to join it to reduce the education cost.

Because the members share the cost. the more members would be the better. - Because the members share went Dutch the cost. The more members, would be the better.

After the class my daily procedure would be finished. and I'll go my home to see my baby and wife. - After the class, my daily procedure schedule would will be finished and I'll go my home to see my baby and my wife.

They are so lovely that it's very enjoyable on my way to home. - They are so lovely that I always look forward to going home it's very enjoyable on my way to home.

That's all. Thank you for reading my articles. - That's all. Thank you for reading my composition articles.

 

Hi Jack!

Thank you for sharing me your daily schedule. Did you have an awesome weekend? I hope you did. Have a great day ahead!

Go Dutch means share expenses equally and split the cost of something

E.g. My friends and I always go Dutch when we go to the theater.

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