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제목 Talk in detail about one particular product or service that your company specialize in. 등록일 2014-07-07
내용 I work for Samsung SDS Company.
I've been working for them for 22 years.
Samsung SDS is a big-sized company, specializing in Total ICT Service Business.
My company is leading the information technology industry in Korea
and our core services are IT consulting, solution and system integration & maintenance.

My department is in charge of IT system maintenance and deals with all kinds of system issues.
I'm currently the general manager in the information system department..
It's my main job to design future planning of customer's information system.

At first I had difficulty with making a solution among the system issues.
But through lots of discussion with my team members who were very smart and energetic,
we found a way out and we were able to make the system work better.

The job suits me well.
I love my job because I work with such smart and hard-working people
and I have many opportunity to use new IT technologies.
담당강사 Bree 등록일 2014-07-07
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I work for Samsung SDS.

I've been working there for 22 years.

Samsung SDS is a big company specializing in Total ICT Service Business.

Samsung SDS is the leading company in Information Technology industry in Korea.

And our core services are IT Consulting, solution and system integration and maintenance.

Our Department is in-charge of IT System maintenance and deals with all kinds of system issues.

I'm currently the general manager of the Information System Department.

My main job is to design future planning of customer's information system.

At first I had difficulty in solving system issues.

But after discussing with my team members, who are smart and potential, we found solutions and we were able to come up with better system.

This job suits me well.

I love my job becauise I work with such smart and hard-working people.

And I also have many opportunities to try new IT Technologies.

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