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제목 | Help me...^^ | 등록일 | 2014-07-07 |
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내용 | Police officers in south korea wear uniforms. They wear white-shirt, navy ties, and navy pants Also, they wear hats. Their main role is to provide a safe environment against crime and accident. Police cars are white and blue with the police symbol marked on the side. So everybody can easily When i was little, i used to live in a single-family house. There were other house, a little playground, and a supermarket. Everything was so close by and everything was small, unlike these days. Now the house have become apartment buildings, the little playground has become a central park, and the supermarket has become a giant shopping center. I live in an apartment and it is convenient but sometimes i miss my old house and the neighborhood. |
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담당강사 | Paula | 등록일 | 2014-07-09 |
첨삭 내용 | Police officers in south korea wear uniforms. They wear white-shirt, navy ties, and navy pants Also, they wear hats. Their main role is to provide a safe environment against crime and accident. Police cars are white and blue with the police symbol marked on the side. So everybody can easily -> Police officers in South Korea wear uniforms. They wear white-shirt, navy ties, and navy pants. Also, they wear hats. Their main role is to provide a safe environment against crime and accident. Police cars are white and blue with the police symbol marked on the side. When i was little, i used to live in a single-family house. There were other house, a little playground, and a supermarket. Everything was so close by and everything was small, unlike these days. Now the house have become apartment buildings, the little playground has become a central park, and the supermarket has become a giant shopping center. I live in an apartment and it is convenient but sometimes i miss my old house and the neighborhood. -> When I was young, I used to live in a single-family house. There were other house, a little playground, and a supermarket. Everything was so close by and everything was small, unlike these days. Now the houses became apartment buildings, the little playground became the central park, and the supermarket became a giant shopping center. I live in an apartment and it is convenient but sometimes I miss my old house and the neighborhood. |