When i was a kid, i live in single-family house. but, now lived in apartment. We has a good environment and it has a big supermarket, school and park nearby. So, these days everyone wanna lived in apartment.

-> When I was a kid, I lived in a single-family house. But, now I live in an apartment. We have a good environment and it has a big supermarket, school and park nearby. So, these days everyone wants to live in an apartment.

When was a kid, we have four distinct seasons. Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter. Unfortunately, the climate has changed now.
So, The Spring and Autumns are disappeared but only Summer and Winter remains.

->When I was a kid, we have four distinct seasons. Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter. Unfortunately, the climate has changed now.  Spring and Autumn are gone but Summer and Winter is still here.

I like to listen to music. But, i just listen' I did not musical instrument. If i get the chance I'd like to play the Guitar.

-> I like to listen to music. But, I just listen because I do not know how to play a musical instrument. If I get the chance I'd like to play the Guitar.