Last Saturday, My family and I went to 북촌 near downtown of Seoul. 북촌 is a famous for the Korean traditional house called 한옥. We saw a lot of houses and streets where were well-maintained. Those were very beautiful and awesome. And I also saw many people who were travelers including Chinese, Japanese and so on. My children felt happy. And also I felt great.

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Last Saturday my family and I went to 북촌, in the downtown area of Seoul. 북촌 is a famous for it's Korean traditional houses called 한옥. We saw a lot of houses and streets that were well-maintained. They were very beautiful and awesome! I also saw many people who were (international) travelers including Chinese and Japanese people, and so on. My children were very happy. I also felt great! It was a wonderful day together as a family!