"Every Sunday night, before starting one week, there is one TV program 'Gag Concert'. Most of business men and students are fanatical about it. Bescause it is very funny comedy show, and especially it is last time to enjoy weekends before starting Monday. in 'Gag Concert' there are several corners which have own subject, charactor, humor, atmosphere, etc. My favorite corner is 'the guide of date'. There are so many situations between boys and girls. Three Comedians appear one by one, and explain analysis of cases and how to date well with funny words. I am crazy for that corner. I don't know how the time passed during show. After that TV program, Many people and I to be gloomy, because new week begins."

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Every Sunday night, before starting one week, there is one TV program 'Gag Concert'. Most of business men and students are fanatical about it. Bescause it is very funny comedy show, and especially it is last time to enjoy weekends before starting Monday. in 'Gag Concert' there are several corners which have own subject, charactor, humor, atmosphere, etc. My favorite corner is 'the guide of date'. There are so many situations between boys and girls. Three Comedians appear one by one, and explain analysis of cases and how to date well with funny words. I am crazy for that corner. I don't know how the time passed during show. After that TV program, Many people and I to be gloomy, because new week begins.

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"Gag Concert" is a Korean TV program every Sunday night. Most businessmen and students are fanatical because it is a very funny show. It has a alot of segments with different subjects, characters, humor, atmosphere, etc. My favorite segment is "The Dating Guide". There are so many situations between boys and girls. Three Comedians appear one by one, and explain the analysis of cases and how to date well with funny words. I am crazy about this segment. I do not notice how time passes as I watch the show. After this program, many people including myself feel gloomy because the weekend is over.

Note:
Blue - additional and better expression
Red - spelling, punctuation and capitalization
Pink - sentence structure
Yellow - word usage
Green - pronouns and articles

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Hi Mr. Won,

Thank you so much for sharing your favorite TV program. You made some good sentences. However, you should be careful with your spelling and capitaliztion. Practice everyday. Take care!

Love,
Teacher Angel

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