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제목 I'm sorry about the absence of today's class. 등록일 2014-07-10
내용 Good mourning Tara~

I'm sorry about the unexpected absence of today's class.
I was upset this mourning because I knew that I leave my jacket to our restaurant.
My wallet was inside of the jacket.

So, I had to go there to prevent to lost my wallet forever.
Fortunately, Anyone didn't take away it. So I'm happy to day to get back it.

Anyway. I beg your pardon about the unexpected event again.
Have a nice day teacher.
See you next tomorrow

Bye~
담당강사 Tara 등록일 2014-07-11
첨삭 내용

Good morning Jack!

It was okay. I noticed that you were so concern about something. Good thing you found your jacket. Anyway, I corrected some of the things about your composition. Please see the following:

Your composition:

Good mourning Tara~ I'm sorry about the unexpected absence of today's class. I was upset this mourning because I knew that I leave my jacket to our restaurant. My wallet was inside of the jacket. So, I had to go there to prevent to lost my wallet forever. Fortunately, Anyone didn't take away it. So I'm happy to day to get back it. Anyway. I beg your pardon about the unexpected event again. Have a nice day teacher. See you next tomorrow Bye~

Revised:

Good morning Tara! I'm sorry about the unexpected absence in today's class. I was upset this morning because I knew that I left my jacket in our restaurant. My wallet was inside of the jacket. So, I had to go there to prevent losing my wallet forever. Fortunately, no one took it away. So I was happy today to get it back. Anyway. I beg your pardon for the unexpected event again. Have a nice day teacher! See you tomorrow! Bye~

 

  I hope that whatever you do on weekend you enjoy it. Take care!

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