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제목 | I'm sorry about the absence of today's class. | 등록일 | 2014-07-10 |
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내용 | Good mourning Tara~ I'm sorry about the unexpected absence of today's class. I was upset this mourning because I knew that I leave my jacket to our restaurant. My wallet was inside of the jacket. So, I had to go there to prevent to lost my wallet forever. Fortunately, Anyone didn't take away it. So I'm happy to day to get back it. Anyway. I beg your pardon about the unexpected event again. Have a nice day teacher. See you next tomorrow Bye~ |
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담당강사 | Tara | 등록일 | 2014-07-11 |
첨삭 내용 | Good morning Jack! It was okay. I noticed that you were so concern about something. Good thing you found your jacket. Anyway, I corrected some of the things about your composition. Please see the following: Your composition: Good mourning Tara~ I'm sorry about the unexpected absence of today's class. I was upset this mourning because I knew that I leave my jacket to our restaurant. My wallet was inside of the jacket. So, I had to go there to prevent to lost my wallet forever. Fortunately, Anyone didn't take away it. So I'm happy to day to get back it. Anyway. I beg your pardon about the unexpected event again. Have a nice day teacher. See you next tomorrow Bye~ Revised: Good morning Tara! I'm sorry about the unexpected absence in today's class. I was upset this morning because I knew that I left my jacket in our restaurant. My wallet was inside of the jacket. So, I had to go there to prevent losing my wallet forever. Fortunately, no one took it away. So I was happy today to get it back. Anyway. I beg your pardon for the unexpected event again. Have a nice day teacher! See you tomorrow! Bye~
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