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제목 | surfing the internet | 등록일 | 2014-07-10 |
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내용 | There are several websites out there, but the website I visit the Facebook and the goal.com. I like to visit Facebook Because I can see my friends are doing. also I see soccer infomation to goal.com. Facebook is a great way to |
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담당강사 | Mitch2 | 등록일 | 2014-07-10 |
첨삭 내용 | [CORRECTION] There are several websites out there, but the website I visit the Facebook and the goal.com. -> There are several websites out there, but the websites I visit the most are Facebook and Goal.com. I like to visit Facebook Because I can see my friends are doing. -> I like to visit Facebook because I can see how my friends are doing. also I see soccer infomation to goal.com. Facebook is a great way to -> Also I can see some soccer information on Goal.com. Facebook is a great way to... [COMMENT] Hi, Aaron! You were able to tell about the websites you visit the most. I just want you to take note of your plural nouns, verbs and modifiers. Keep it up! Have a great evening, Teacher Mitch ^_^ |