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제목 surfing the internet 등록일 2014-07-10
내용 There are several websites out there, but the website I visit the Facebook and the goal.com.
I like to visit Facebook Because I can see my friends are doing.
also I see soccer infomation to goal.com.
Facebook is a great way to
담당강사 Mitch2 등록일 2014-07-10
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There are several websites out there, but the website I visit the Facebook and the goal.com.

-> There are several websites out there, but the websites I visit the most are Facebook and Goal.com.

I like to visit Facebook Because I can see my friends are doing.

-> I like to visit Facebook because I can see how my friends are doing. 

also I see soccer infomation to goal.com. Facebook is a great way to

-> Also I can see some soccer information on Goal.com. Facebook is a great way to...

[COMMENT]

Hi, Aaron! 

You were able to tell about the websites you visit the most. I just want you to take note of your plural nouns, verbs and modifiers. Keep it up!

Have a great evening,

Teacher Mitch ^_^

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