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| 제목 | my neighborhood | 등록일 | 2014-07-10 |
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| 내용 | I live in Seoul, Gildong village. Than elsewhere in the neighborhood of Seoul there are many homes. (Other city is.....many high building, apartment) A short walk from my home hub parks. I finished work early in the movement from there. The park is always many people walk out. Park as close to the city is so crowded that I like my neighborhood. I lived fifteen years old. I want continue to live here. |
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| 담당강사 | Rio | 등록일 | 2014-07-15 |
| 첨삭 내용 |
I live in Gildong Village, Seoul City. This has been my residence for 15 years now. I feel like staying here for the rest of my life. In this village, there are many big and magnificent houses. There is also a Hub Park nearby. After work, I usually go there on foot. Since it is closed to the city, more often than not, we see a lot of people roaming and playing around in the park. |
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