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제목 Weather and lesson .. 등록일 2014-07-11
내용 As you man know, It's very hot and humid here in summer.
Especially, it was really muggy last night.
I couldn't sleep well.

I'm feeling low today, but nevertheless I'd like to tell myself "Cheer up".
It won't be long until this weekend.
It's already Friday afternoon today.


I can remember our previous lesson in Unit 9 was about "Prior Approval".
I can see that
Should a employee has any packages to send out, he needs prior approval from his boss.

In addition,
I found out the estimated period of delivery in case of domestic and international shipment.
It will be delivered 2~3 days and one week respectively.

Of cource,
It depends on the recipient region and the way of transportation, for example via air, sea etc.
담당강사 Bree 등록일 2014-07-11
첨삭 내용

You must have heard that it's hot and humid in Korea every Summer.

Last night was very muggy.

I couldn't sleep well.

I feel so down today, but nevertheless, I should tell myself to 'cheer up'.

It won't be long and it's finally weekend.

It's already Friday afternoon now.

I can remember our previous lesson in Unit 9 about "Prior Approval".

I understand that should an employee send any packages out, he needs prior approval from his boss.

In addition, I learned that the estimated period of deliver for domestic and international shipment.

It will take 2-3 days and one week respectively.

Of course, it depends on the recipient's region and mode of transportation. For example. via airfreight, ship, etc.

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