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제목 | the places where I enjoy jogging .. | 등록일 | 2014-07-14 |
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내용 | My favorite place to jog is the fitness center near my office. It's very big and has a lot of sport facilities for club members' convenience, so I make use of those facilities to exercise. I like jogging on a treadmill there, because there are many people who use it to work out, and seeing people doing the same thing as I am makes me feel motivated. I usually jog in the evening after dinner. But when I go back home to visit my parents, I jog at a park near our house. The park is a good place because of suitable size and many lights. One more thing that I like the place is that it's quiet and fewer people so I can jog freely. I can also see many children at the playground or see old people talking on the benches as I pass by. I like those two places to jog. |
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담당강사 | Bree | 등록일 | 2014-07-14 |
첨삭 내용 | My most favorite place to jog is the fitness center nearby my office. It's very big and has a lot of equipments for club members' convenience. That's why I use those equipments to exercise. I like jogging on a treadmill. Many people use it to exercise. And seeing other people do it motivates me. I usually jog in the evening after dinner. But when I visit my parents' home, I jog nearby their place. The other place I like jogging at is a quiet place and fewer people so I can jog freely. I can also see many children at the playground or see old people talking on benches as I pass by. I like those two places to jog. |